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A1 EYV – feedback

I received feedback on my first assignment ‘My Square Mile’ from Moira Lovell, my tutor.  I happy with the suggestions and insights she’s offered and looking forward to working on them.

Action points:

  • Include more research on Blog – note to self that this provides evidence that I’ve actually read and researched the suggest areas in the course material.
  • Photos need a ‘tighter edit’ – these weren’t edited at all as SOC jpeg. Need to discuss with Moira how much editing is expected in exercises as well as assignments in this initial phase.
  • Next step is to choose how to photography subject and take a more consistent approach.

Research suggestions:

Tutor’s feedback is attached as pdf: andrew_fitzgibbon_assignment_1_feedback

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